Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Kaspar Layout Practise

Original
First Try
Second Try

2 comments:

patrick sevc said...

If you don't mind a critique from me;

I'd say the construction looks fairly solid. But you generally made Kaspar much smaller. Maintain his girth

make sure not to cramp things together, like how the foot is touching the mouth in your 2nd attempt, (but not in your 1st). And leave more space between facial features so they can read nicely. Your eyes are right up against his nose.

Get more dynamic lines of action. You toned them all down. Most people do when new at this, keep your eyes keen and practice.

And don't forget his tail! :)

Try some more!

Thunderrobot said...

Thank you very much Patrick,

I totally agree with everything you said. I will try re-drawing this pose a few more times and play around with the lines of action.